Thursday, November 11, 2010

why B's school needs a beverage machine...

Beverage Machine

Yes, I think there should be a beverage machine.
I think that because students get thirsty for something other than water during recess.
Students just wanna spend their money on stuff to make them look cool.
Plus, it would make a lot of money for our school.

You most likely won't agree with me, but we need a beverage machine.
We need one because students get thirsty for something other than water during recess.
When we play outside, we get dehydrated and need something like a Gatorade to fill us up.
The problem with that is we don't have Gatorades or any other drinks to help fill us up.

You should agree with me that students just wanna spend money on stuff to make them look cool.
When your a kid in 5th grade all the way up to high school,
all you care about is the popularity.
If students bring lots of money to school and buy a bunch of drinks for their friends,
then they would be considered cool.
It would also make a lot of money for our school.
Which brings me to my next reason.

It would make a lot of money for our school.
Our school is low on money right now and we need a boosting.
This beverage machine could be our boosting.
If we had one, think of how much money we would make in a year!
We would most likely have enough for a couple more field trips a year.
You should really think this through carefully.

Students get thirsty for something other than water during recess.
Students just wanna spend money on stuff to make them look cool.
Plus, it would make a lot of money for our school.
Those are the three reasons why we need a beverage machine.
Please think this through.
I hope you think this through carefully and make the right choice.

2 comments:

  1. Why is she wearing her backpack? ~ Logan

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  2. This definitely shows how's she taught to write her paragraphs in school....

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